Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Eclipse




He revolves,
He shines
And then is dark
He is omnipresent.

He is part of you,
He is part of us.
He is the magic of the night.

Look up now!
You can see his face
Maybe smiling
Maybe singing the blues
And for a moment
It will appear as if in a movie reel.

Inspired by a beautiful pic By a dear friend Giancarlo drago 

3 comments:

  1. Very nice! Love the way you lead the reader on, all the while pointing out tiny tibits that gives your poem flavor. I really enjoyed it's last stich. You just answer the question, What is the poem about? Wonderful.

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  2. Zen Gatha

    High up there
    In the tree blossom
    Smiles from a flower
    I bird sings the blues
    shh its just you!

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  3. Thank you Both for your words <3

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