Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Lost Sympathy





Lost sympathy,
One moment
Everything looks black
As I go deeper
Like a broken boat
Sinking In the great ocean;
Heavy breathing.

Lost sympathy,
There is no good word
That can help me now,
Like an endless vortex
I drift

Then I awake ....
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2 comments:

  1. emmett wheatfallApril 7, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    Love the first stanza! Oh man that's so good. It's so well written I felt like I was sinking in the poem. I got caught in the vortex. A very nice write.

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  2. MissyApril 8, 2011 at 2:44 AM

    Thank you so much emmett so so much! <3

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